Friday, February 22, 2019

critic nr.1



















1 comment:

  1. Feedback:
    •I really like the diversity in the photos that it not only shows photos of the dorms but also activities that would take place
    •I also like the different perspective introduce which helps emphasize the little things you wouldn’t really notice in a normal school day
    Constructive Criticism:
    •Of you want you can try to incorporate more people engaging in activities like walking the halls,studying and etc.Unless if you are trying to show the story of one student going through their own day and what they face on their own.
    (Sorry if the last part doesn’t make sense)

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